Haha, wow, a comic, sure is funny!
Anyway, don't forget- we're putting up the redrawn/rewritten comic from PAGE ONE every Monday and Friday! Check it out guys, it's supercool!
I like to try and draw not just what the characters are saying, but also what they are thinking. Take those last three panels of Alyssa. First we have her comedic shock at the hole in the wall, then I attempted to move that into a mix of shock and betrayal in the next one. Followed by a determined and vengeful anger in the last. Perhaps holding Sebastian captive was just her way of asking nicely - and if that's the case, who knows what her next move will be.